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Good story. Don't forget the 'cuckquean' tag.

Very well done!

I hope my writing will someday be as good as yours. Well done!

Great Story along with your other stories, maybe you should do a series similar to The Novelist by Nicequip, but with the dominant male having more money, a private island, and other things like those mentioned in Threads: The Island by JammyJimmy and the original Justin Thyme stories by Callicious. The longer the story, the better in my opinion, especially since it keeps pulling people back to read more, and if done properly, it'd out perform other stories. It's great when the male has numerous females to choose from throughout the story. Plus short stories aren't going to be read by people with ADHD and other problems that result in being easily distracted.

i read most of the first page, then skimmed it and didn't like it.. sorry

You have given me a great idea for a scene I’m setting up

Very much enjoyed it