by AbbeFaria
This is such a good second story, I cannot wait to read more. . .
thanks for posting
Not many writers can pull off eroticism through the first person, unless the POV is through the eyes of a female, BUT thanks to your incredibly craft and style - you have done what few writers have done. Bravo - great job!!!
JR Parz
Really good. Erotic and well written. More please, soon.
Thnanks.
Very good continuation. Left me wanting more, MUCH more. Please continue this series and SOON!
Keep it up. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I like that you are drawing it out. Great wording and detail.