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This is such a good second story, I cannot wait to read more. . .
thanks for posting
You are off to an awesome start!
Not many writers can pull off eroticism through the first person, unless the POV is through the eyes of a female, BUT thanks to your incredibly craft and style - you have done what few writers have done. Bravo - great job!!!
JR Parz
Keep it up
Really good. Erotic and well written. More please, soon.
Thnanks.
Very good 2nd chap
Very good continuation. Left me wanting more, MUCH more. Please continue this series and SOON!
To short
But still awsome
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