All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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This is such a good second story, I cannot wait to read more. . .

thanks for posting

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You are off to an awesome start!

Not many writers can pull off eroticism through the first person, unless the POV is through the eyes of a female, BUT thanks to your incredibly craft and style - you have done what few writers have done. Bravo - great job!!!

JR Parz

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep it up

Really good. Erotic and well written. More please, soon.

Thnanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very good 2nd chap

Very good continuation. Left me wanting more, MUCH more. Please continue this series and SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
To short

But still awsome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice pace Bro

Keep it up. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I like that you are drawing it out. Great wording and detail.

Anonymous
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