by ParisBlue
Ya need a spellchecker. But the overall story was very good. I'd like to read more
You need an editor. Don't like spellchecking in my head every few words. Sorry.
Somehow, even in desperation, I can't picture having sex in a public restroom. I also can't picture uploading a story without proofreading it. Even my old Word 97 catches most of my spelling errors. But it was HOT!
Just looked at your profile, Member for three days and your first upload. But you still need to proofread!
People need to chill. You had a few spelling errors but in my opinion it didn't distract from the story at all.
This story was so hot! Would love to read more about these two. Hope you write more soon! Either about these two or anything else
Yeah. I didn't realise that I couldn't go back and edit my works after they were submitted. And since I post from my phone it's fairly difficult to spellcheck. Oh well, you live and you learn. I'll do better next time. 😁