All Comments on 'Exhibit A'

by ParisBlue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Moooooorre! This was so fucking hot

baikalisanbaikalisanover 7 years ago
Good

Ya need a spellchecker. But the overall story was very good. I'd like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmmmm.

You need an editor. Don't like spellchecking in my head every few words. Sorry.

o2byoungo2byoungover 7 years ago
Really?

Somehow, even in desperation, I can't picture having sex in a public restroom. I also can't picture uploading a story without proofreading it. Even my old Word 97 catches most of my spelling errors. But it was HOT!

o2byoungo2byoungover 7 years ago
OK- Give you a break

Just looked at your profile, Member for three days and your first upload. But you still need to proofread!

kurlanskykurlanskyover 7 years ago

People need to chill. You had a few spelling errors but in my opinion it didn't distract from the story at all.

This story was so hot! Would love to read more about these two. Hope you write more soon! Either about these two or anything else

ParisBlueParisBlueover 7 years agoAuthor
I was naive

Yeah. I didn't realise that I couldn't go back and edit my works after they were submitted. And since I post from my phone it's fairly difficult to spellcheck. Oh well, you live and you learn. I'll do better next time. 😁

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Try spell check!

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