The Rescue

Really Good Work

This story felt so true that I got the feeling that this is autobiographical. Real people, real place. Nothing made-up about either Robyn or Lisa, so far as I could tell. And they both seemed to be people that I would enjoy being friends with.

Excellent work. Especially if they are two real people. In some ways, it's easier to write about somebody who isn't real.

This was really good. It was sweet. Loving. Tender.

Awesome Story

I loved it so much, especially as it's in my favourite city and can relate to almost every location, you obviously know Melbourne, as only a local would know most of the things you mentioned.
I am so looking forward to reading more of this story, in my opinion it was very well-written, it showed sensualness, compassion, slowness, and a true romantic story, you certainly know how to write, can't wait for the next chapter.
I live in Melbourne close to a couple of the Suburbs mentioned, and have been to all of the suburbs you mentioned, I laughed with the heel comment, yes it is something us girls have to bear.
I am available to offer a twist to the story as well, if you want.
Please keep up the awesome work.

Another great story

The above says it all.

Very good story!

That I enjoyed greatly. Thank you very much for sharing it with us!