All Comments on 'A Change of Scenery Pt. 02'

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WhiskeyIsGoodWhiskeyIsGoodover 7 years ago
Didn't see that ending coming

But I definitely liked it. I expected a bit more to happen between Jim and Bridget and I definitely did not expect Jim to wind up with Sammy...much less, for Sammy to have a dick. However, I liked that they did get together and that Sammy is a completely different person, then Bridget and much more loving. For a moment, I thought maybe he would end up with Molly and that would have been good too, but I'm satisfied with how it turned out. It was a very hot story and really got me turned on, to be honest lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not as good as the the first part.

I don't like how every story on here has to end as a love story, they all have the same ending if you ask me. But there was some good parts and your first part is the best I've seen on here in a while.

twinsfantwinsfanabout 7 years ago
welcome back

it's been awhile since you have posted. As always you tell a great story. i look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
That was pretty good

LOL, didn't expect a happy end like that. Really liked the theme of domination throughout the story. The hero having a nice dick but not being able to use it was a nice touch. You could have fleshed out the characters more. A story with psychological elements like domination, coercion and humiliation benefits if we actually know the characters' motivations and inner workings.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 1 year ago

I agree with your intro statement, the ending is more enjoyable. Of course, we have to wonder about Bridget's claims of having everyone at school under her thumb. Will she let him be only with Sammy. Are Sammy & Bridget friends with boy-benefits that will share him? And what are their college plans? The possibilities are encouraging.

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