All Comments on 'A Tiger's Prey'

For a first time post. you did an excellent job. I did stumble on this sentence "You gentle a little at my anguish". I think you meant to say 'gently chuckled', other than that the story flowed quite nicely. I found the story engaging as it proceeded to it's climax...literally.

I loved it and i think my own master would too!

parts of the read are a little confusing, however I absolute love the story and it's very well written .