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Apple on a String

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by Anonymous

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by cookiejar06/25/04

Darn...

You are a master storyteller! That was short but fantastic!

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by doormouse07/07/04

Hot

That was really good!!!!!!!!

Agreed with the previous comment, you tell a wicked tale ;-)

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by Anonymous08/22/04

Apple on a String

Looking. Reading. Loving it!

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by Anonymous11/18/04

daaaaaamn

omg it was short yes..but to the point..one of the best ever.loved the twist

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by Anonymous12/01/04

wow!

very short, but - wow! Never expected that. Well done.

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by Cinner05/12/12

Extremely well done!

A very poignant story! It will haunt me for a very long time.

Exceptional!

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