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this poem is loooooong, long loooooong! and I like it that way. I am simply amazed by the duality of this poem. How it can feel so full of subtext when it is written in black and white is thrilling. It sometimes reads like a play, and that's an interesting thing. I found the structure, the exact descriptions and overall feel of it to be simply breathtaking. Thanks for the read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was quite filling.
So ..
twas a pleasure to spend an afternoon drinking and listening to ye talk JC.
You have the gift
and sure there's nothing better with a glass of mothersmilk
than a good story
Thank you for sharing
Twas a wonderful piece
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