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Sorry, I don't think it works
I found this a very dry piece. Whilst it was horific, it certainly wasn't erotic. The heroine was never given a personality other than her bravery. I just couldn't connect with it.
Non-erotic horror
Nothing is as horrific as the real world tragedies. You have captured the cruelty of the concentration camps very well in this short, but powerful story.
A very touching piece
A very good piece not erotic but still fantastic
great story
i was drawn by the use of POE, great short story, great imagination; wish i could say more, but im not good at giving feedback.
good
though it didn't go itno the true horrors of her experiences it gave enough to still chill the bones
Tears in my eyes after reading this
I dont understand how people can be so cruel and inhumane. Your story describes one (just one) of the worst scenarios and I shudder because, God help us, that innate cruelty of man is alive today. I see it in acts of rage, anger and hate that occur across this world on a daily basis.
A well written tale that I never expected to read on this site, having said that, thanks for sharing it.
sorry but that didn't work
the second hand narrative puts us too distant from the events. Didn't grab
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