I love stories of sister and brother incest especially the ones where the sister initiates the sex. Thanks for a WONDERFUL, and short story.
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Anonymous06/25/04
Disappointing
So there's all this good build-up in tension, and she gives him a hand job, and then the rest of it is just a paragraph? All that great stuff, only to follow it up with "Oh, yeah, we had sex a lot, the end."
Do us a favor and please write up the *rest* of the story, okay?
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Anonymous06/25/04
write more shy incest and gay
write more shy 1sts
by
Anonymous06/25/04
i hope that there will be more
i love your story but you need more details i hope that you write more to your story
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Anonymous06/28/04
Poor Ending
The build up was good....but I felt cheated by the ending...
This isn't Anne's work, or at least her finished work. It's definately her premise,and her tenderness but she has never written a story this abrupt - what happened Anne? Where are you?
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Anonymous04/14/05
Hi Sis!
Now this is a HOT story!
Love this one!
I’m calling my sister, tonight!
NOT a bit quick to allow advances from his sister. REAL brothers sren't such pussy-whipped loser whiny Cartman gay-tards when a hot sister wants to play house! The only thing that really sucked was the abrupt ending.
The plot was decent but him thinking his sister was doing it in her sleep r
I liked it just a little on the short side for me thanks for writing it.I better get off here and get my RV cleaned up heading home tomorrow or the next day.It's Harley time eight or ten days on my bike.
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SIBLING INCEST
I love stories of sister and brother incest especially the ones where the sister initiates the sex. Thanks for a WONDERFUL, and short story.
Disappointing
So there's all this good build-up in tension, and she gives him a hand job, and then the rest of it is just a paragraph? All that great stuff, only to follow it up with "Oh, yeah, we had sex a lot, the end."
Do us a favor and please write up the *rest* of the story, okay?
write more shy incest and gay
write more shy 1sts
i hope that there will be more
i love your story but you need more details i hope that you write more to your story
Poor Ending
The build up was good....but I felt cheated by the ending...
you
you know what to do :)
This is not Anne
This isn't Anne's work, or at least her finished work. It's definately her premise,and her tenderness but she has never written a story this abrupt - what happened Anne? Where are you?
Hi Sis!
Now this is a HOT story!
Love this one!
I’m calling my sister, tonight!
Me-I know what happens next
However I ceased to be a virgin lond ago
Good start, but...
...the story was painfully truncated.
Wish there was more!
Especially with him a virgin and her experienced. tell the story of his first good orgasm at the hands of his sexy sister.
Short and sweet!
It was good while it lasted. Too bad there wasn't more.
not enough
a bit quick to allow advances from his sister! not even a protest! poorly imagined! not worth even one star
NOT a bit quick to allow advances from his sister. REAL brothers sren't such pussy-whipped loser whiny Cartman gay-tards when a hot sister wants to play house! The only thing that really sucked was the abrupt ending.
The plot was decent but him thinking his sister was doing it in her sleep r
The story was fine
I liked it just a little on the short side for me thanks for writing it.I better get off here and get my RV cleaned up heading home tomorrow or the next day.It's Harley time eight or ten days on my bike.
Again, I loved the story
but it was just too damn short.
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