All Comments on 'Hairdressing Valentine'

The story is hot and well written, but is it romantic? It almost seems more like an erotic couple. That the author does not take badly my comment, it is not a criticism, I simply think that perhaps it is not in the correct section.

That's why I give it 4 *

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

If there was a Lit prize for "Short & Sharp" you'd win it,

Hands Down.

HP

In this line:

"Helen took my empty mug and put it on a work surface."

Helen should read Mary!

More like Non-con. I'm thinking when this poor guy gets loose, he runs for the hills and she never sees him again, Screw the dance. Screw taking any chances that the crazy woman ties up up again if she gets angry and cuts his pecker off. No, definitely NOT a romance. Just a crazy woman using a man. Hell, she sits on his face? Take a big bite and put an end to the nonsense. This a a scary woman.

The Anonymous comment dated 18 July is more about anon's prejudices than my story. Why post it?