All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 03'

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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Nice writing, but

The story is being unnecessarily dragged out. The author may have a reason for the style, but it isn't working for me. Sorry!

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Jeeze...

Mrs.Adams doesn't seem to take 'NO' for an answer, does she? However, Grampa doesn't seem too worried about the possible consequences, now does he?

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