It's obvious that English is not your first language. Good luck with your ESL studies
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Anonymous01/18/17
Hard to read!
You have a good base for your story, however it is very difficult to read. I would get someone to edit and help you in the sentence structure and surplege. Overall it could be a really good story!
English
ESL
It's obvious that English is not your first language. Good luck with your ESL studies
Hard to read!
You have a good base for your story, however it is very difficult to read. I would get someone to edit and help you in the sentence structure and surplege. Overall it could be a really good story!
Interesting idea.
Poorly executed. So a "keep writing" 3*
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