He really has no idea what life is going to throw at him. In our human society he will experience pain, loss, sorrow, guilt, shame and all those other beasties in exchange for sex. For love comes in many forms and instead of heavenly pure love he gives it all up for evil corruption, sex with his discovery of a lesser species, still in the process. He does, however, love her, but they will be subjected to the evils of Satan, because as there were previously none on Heaven. Beautifully written...
But he will come to regret it, you spared him no warning.
But then again he is a curious fallen angel eh? ;)
His emotions are ten fold of a mortal man, if he gets depressed and gives in to his now newly inner devils, we're toast, and another epidemic shall begin.
What a silly notion it was to create humans, eh?
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Anonymous12/27/08
The story is like a repition in a way
I will say 50/50 because the plot is good however too many words and phrases have been repeated in the story...It needs rewriting as for the previous comment on here...talk sense instead of garbbage...
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Poor Befuddled Arch Angel...
He really has no idea what life is going to throw at him. In our human society he will experience pain, loss, sorrow, guilt, shame and all those other beasties in exchange for sex. For love comes in many forms and instead of heavenly pure love he gives it all up for evil corruption, sex with his discovery of a lesser species, still in the process. He does, however, love her, but they will be subjected to the evils of Satan, because as there were previously none on Heaven. Beautifully written...
But he will come to regret it, you spared him no warning.
But then again he is a curious fallen angel eh? ;)
His emotions are ten fold of a mortal man, if he gets depressed and gives in to his now newly inner devils, we're toast, and another epidemic shall begin.
What a silly notion it was to create humans, eh?
The story is like a repition in a way
I will say 50/50 because the plot is good however too many words and phrases have been repeated in the story...It needs rewriting as for the previous comment on here...talk sense instead of garbbage...
loved it
very good it kept me captivated loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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