Down on the Farm

Yawn inducing, should have been in non-erotic. 3/4 down the first page and still details about moving and building and how much everything costs.

Actually...

...as a writer myself, I thought this was quite good. Too many people (such as the other person that commented) interpret "erotic" as "must include graphic sex" or just be outright "porn". This had just the right amount of tension and kept me quite engaged. I am hoping there will be more.

A good start

I just want to say that liked your story so far, and I am eager to read the next part.
Don't let the miserable sods that sometimes come on here put you off.
You have something here, let see where you go.
Good luck.

You're looking for trouble!

18-inch tiles on a floor that needed shoring up...gonna crack and/or pop. But good start nonetheless. Like your stories. 5*

nice tale

you could have got a wet mix and had it pumped into the house with a hose.
I like a 12 inch for smaller rooms like a kitchen but that is just me.

Next Chapter

You have a good start now I look forward to the next chapter.

Cool

Good story. Fresh and friendly.
I hope there will be more chapters (as well as "My Number").
Good job!
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Pretty Smart

I enjoyed your writing and your home renovation. Everything is correct so far. Would like a detailed description of Gina hair color, length, long legs, height, weight, eye color, breast size, nice posterior etc etc etc. No mention about plans for the land or farm. Grapes???????? Neighbors?//// Looking for more. I like it. 5 stars.

Sawdusty

Actually, part of my writing style is to keep those details at a minimum, and I do it deliberately. I might have been even more sparse than usual, but I like to let the reader's imagination fill in the gaps. I did note that Gina's hair looked brunette at first, but once out of the glare, appeared a bit on the auburn side, and that she was on the fair-skinned side with freckles. I noted that the "carpet matched the drapes," which tells you that she isn't shaved bare.

How big are her boobs? Well, I know how I picture her, but that's to my tastes; how you picture her might be a touch different. By not specifying it, she matches both of our preferences.

One of the physical characteristics I usually specify is height, but I left that one out in this story; that was deliberate.

Home improvement

I really enjoyed this story. I liked reading about the renovations because my daddy taught me basic electrical, plumbing and carpentry when I lived at home. When I moved to my own country cottage, I redid all the rooms with plaster, paint and wallpaper. So I read the that part with a critical eye. When she shows up. I was happy to see that she was down to earth and felt good that he's found a part in crime. Okay, it's just a story but is was a good one. It reminded me of me twenty years ago.

Nice story

Sounds like you wrote of your move to somewhere around Tenn. I lived in PA around the area that you where in, PA was nice place to live but I hated the fucking tax's

Great start, I hope it proceeds as well as "my number" which is my favorite story running right now.

Not Enough

Not enough meat to the story, there was more about the construction project than about the romance.

Pleasant Read

Nice Characters. I wonder if he will be able to escape his writer's block.

Interesting Setup

But seems like the story is incomplete. We just start to get to know the characters and it abruptly ends. Nice writing.

Excellent lead-in for several chapters!

Well written with a very good reality plus some serious fun.
BRAVO!!!

More!

Yes, definitely hope to see many more chapters. So much future potential already set up.
Loved the construction details.
Please keep this story going.

What they said.

Having the same skills, I appreciate the remodeling details as they help to paint the scene. For many of us, there is more to a well told story than just the sex. There is great potential here for many more chapters. Not to do so would sorely disappoint many of us who enjoy and look forward to each new offering. Five and faved.

Really Liked It

Always enjoy your work and this was great. It would make an interesting series, but works well as a stand alone short story.

A very good start

Please continue this story.

Well written!

This an enjoyable story and I, too, would like to read more! Great job.

Sweet, fun and sexy!

More please!
Love Gina's personality....reminds me of myself. ;)

Keep up the good work!!!

Sunny Rest

Been to both Sunny Rest and Sandy Hook many times. Eastern Pa resident.

Girlfriend for an Hour

Certainly a fun way to get acquainted, especially so if you don't even know each others names.
lol