Amazing work. You are a master at weaving sex with complex emotions. The way he took her against the wall after making her cry was so damn powerful. Love Katie's potty mouth, too. She's the perfect blend of sassy, rough, and vulnerable. I wish I could meet a girl like her in real life. Especially with that big booty of hers. Big brother needs to spank that ass til it matches her hair.
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Anonymous01/19/17
Very hot
Loved the story, even with the two obvious mistakes.
Anyone who plans to have sex without contraception is planning to get pregnant. Is that really part of the girl's plan? Why? This, "Cum inside me, I'll take the Morning After Pill," is just irritatingly stupid. Why doesn't Jack have condoms? He can take responsibility too. He's an adult.
This vacation home must be GIGANTIC, or Jack's parents must drink themselves into an alcoholic stupor in the evenings for them not to hear what's going on. Or does the idea of their children and niece fucking around with each other excite the parents?
I agree...Here are 2 very active sexual women and neither one on any type of birth control. Katie is just 18 yet she had 2 long term BF sexual relations. Not enough time. See my email
You guys are in for the greatest story ever seen on here . This is my second time reading it (I read it before it disappeared on here) it is the best story on here
Yes, a great story and build up. Now that its happened; hopefully they will do it all the time in different places and when their parents are gone; slow and great !! I hope now the dialogue is more involved and all then beautiful emotions flow well for them. Of course, his baby sister will teach him how to be a great lover and she will benefit greatly. Maybe they will move in with each other and become a couple ?? Thank you !
English
Wow
Wow just... Wow
Wow it is
Now that heir feeling for each other are in the open this should get really interesting, hopefully Julia takes it well in the end.
5*
Wow
Just Wow. Great!
if anyone
Would like to contact me...
misstresschris007@gmail.com
So fucking good. Hits all the right spots.
Amazing work. You are a master at weaving sex with complex emotions. The way he took her against the wall after making her cry was so damn powerful. Love Katie's potty mouth, too. She's the perfect blend of sassy, rough, and vulnerable. I wish I could meet a girl like her in real life. Especially with that big booty of hers. Big brother needs to spank that ass til it matches her hair.
Very hot
Loved the story, even with the two obvious mistakes.
Awesome
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jack is as dumb as a box of rocks...
Not only that, but his emotional age is 10. Just a bit too inconsistent to be believable. 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Incestuous Family Planning
Anyone who plans to have sex without contraception is planning to get pregnant. Is that really part of the girl's plan? Why? This, "Cum inside me, I'll take the Morning After Pill," is just irritatingly stupid. Why doesn't Jack have condoms? He can take responsibility too. He's an adult.
This vacation home must be GIGANTIC, or Jack's parents must drink themselves into an alcoholic stupor in the evenings for them not to hear what's going on. Or does the idea of their children and niece fucking around with each other excite the parents?
Great story..had me worried about Jack leaving
I agree...Here are 2 very active sexual women and neither one on any type of birth control. Katie is just 18 yet she had 2 long term BF sexual relations. Not enough time. See my email
Don't stop
You guys are in for the greatest story ever seen on here . This is my second time reading it (I read it before it disappeared on here) it is the best story on here
Yes, a great story and build up. Now that its happened; hopefully they will do it all the time in different places and when their parents are gone; slow and great !! I hope now the dialogue is more involved and all then beautiful emotions flow well for them. Of course, his baby sister will teach him how to be a great lover and she will benefit greatly. Maybe they will move in with each other and become a couple ?? Thank you !
fanbloodytastic
I really hope there is more to come in this hot story
Oh boy... it's really starting to get good now.
I'm really glad to see that they are finally ringing each others bells. I can't wait to see which direction you are going from here. Good job!
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