Really liked the way you created the ending of the story as a foreshadowing of the future in context of the natural flow of the current story. Nicely done!
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Anonymous01/25/17
Amazing
Loved the slow build up and the long tantalizing tease. It lets you know that this couple will have a long relationship instead of a short lived physical tryst.
English
Very enjoyable
Thanks!
Delightful
Lovely tale, well told.
very nice story
Nice length too. It was not rushed.
The ending
Really liked the way you created the ending of the story as a foreshadowing of the future in context of the natural flow of the current story. Nicely done!
Amazing
Loved the slow build up and the long tantalizing tease. It lets you know that this couple will have a long relationship instead of a short lived physical tryst.
This is a six star story, at least for me.
I gave it five, but I would give it six if I could.
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