by Softly
I'm glad you once again explained about the movies he had watched of her, it made sense as to why he would agree to marry this woman.
However, I don't understand what he did about law school. His parents gave him the advice to travel. Did he plan to return to law school after graduating pre-law?
I greatly enjoyed this story! You might consider developing it into a much longer story to more fully develop the characters. Everything seemed to happen so quickly, even though it was over a long period of time. Still a great story, though!
I love a love story but he is a "loving" rapist. She was incapable of communicating her consent. Therefore there was no consent. Therefore he is a rapist.
This was not a romance, this was a man raping a woman who could not respond. She never told him yes, she never gave permission, she couldn't say yes or no.
Rape pure and simple, regardless of a happy ending.
And he is a creepy rapist. I am glad someone else pointed it out too. As a male, I would feel not okay with doing this.