It is always nice to know the other point of view, what the other person thinks, what the woman feels in this case.
I hope there will be more chapters.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
I enjoyed the way you wrote about Jane's voice. I hope you will do another story. Maybe have Jane and Sarah sharing Jack. They both love him with no reservation.
English
Very nice
Hopefully there's more to come.
Another point of view of history
It is always nice to know the other point of view, what the other person thinks, what the woman feels in this case.
I hope there will be more chapters.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
love it
more please, now she is going to be living there maybe we can have a triad of lovers.
Bad
This is so terrible, even for a free site. If this was an open mic night, you'd be puking on stage. That actually might be funny.
Another fantastic story
I enjoyed the way you wrote about Jane's voice. I hope you will do another story. Maybe have Jane and Sarah sharing Jack. They both love him with no reservation.
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