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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn06/20/04

powerful

read. Thank you for sharing.

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by dreamsweet06/20/04

grr

hygiene
antiseptic

I even know that...

dreamsweet

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by Toward A Word06/21/04

so painful

I wish this was only the product of a vivid literary talent - but the pain seems too real - peace be with you

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by Tathagata06/21/04

bribg the demons

into the light and it kills them slowly
tough to read
even tougher to write I'm sure
Thank you

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by WickedEve06/21/04

you did very well

handling this subject matter. You created a poem that many will be able to relate to in some way or the other. And for those who can't relate, it's still very readable because of the way you wrote it.

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by lostandfounder06/21/04

Oh God...

this poem was hard to read. Loneliness and pain. Very well written.

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by doormouse06/22/04

God...

You almost had me screaming.. Tell Tell Tell!!! ;-)

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by twelveoone06/26/04

portrayal

of the ultimate betrayal
I cannot add more than was said below

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