Storm World Ch. 07

Wow!

I'm really enjoying the reveal process that you have going on. You answer our questions and leave us with many more. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Inspite of your comments well done

I appreciate the table of characters at the front of the story. I think they should stay. It is useful to be reminded who is who. Also like the units conversion at the back.

Your story is moving along nicely. I'm sure you would like to perfect it but it read well.

Thank you

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Please o please dont stop writing this wonderul story.

Dear Ripperfish

I would read your stories if you wrote them with a crayon on one ply TP. I am in no rush, personally to see this story finished. Moved along sure. Maybe skip ahead some in story time. Cut away from the main characters and let us get to know the traitors, or any humans that may or may not be out to come to this planet? Just trying to give your creativity a kick start. * GRIN * In closing I Truly Enjoy this Story and I am Not a Cat Guy ..... Thank You

I Love this story

i hope you wont stop this story i love it i look forward to each chapter no matter how long it takes

Doing great with the story

Very nicely done.. keep it up

Don't stop

I really enjoy your stories. Take the time you need to finish.

I am not sure why feel unsatisfied with this chapter

I like and look forward to more.
And please, take as much time as you need between chapters.
I am following several stories that only release chapters every few weeks, some not for months.
It's worth the wait for a great read.

Please don't stop!!

I love this story! It's ok if you take your time!

Quitting should be an option,

this story deserves to continue. Additionally there were no glaring errors that I noticed so a really good effort R.F, thank you, excellent entertainment. Looking forward to the next installment which I'll happily wait a couple of weeks for. :)

Dude

Just do what you have to, great read as always.

Do Not Give UP

Please do not get discouraged at what you may think is slow progress.

Yes, you knocked out UASS in roughly four months, and you are now five months down the road on Storm World. But, you have stretched out your stage to encompass a much larger cast of characters, this time. On top of that, there is a constant sense of imminent disaster throughout the chapters, so far. As one male "cat" indicated, it is hard to remember they only crashed a little over one day ago!

I am amazed that you wove such an intriguing tale in UASS with four main characters (1 human and 3 "cats" plus small number of periferals), and now you are reaching out with double that number! Please do keep the cast listing at the head of each chapter, too easy to get lost otherwise.

I look forward to each new chapter, and am so glad when one appears. Just as someone else posted, there are other stories which I have followed that took years for the authors to complete. Several other serials in my interest list are ongoing.

A good story is worth waiting for. Your story has shown itself thus far to be well worth the waiting.

Just take it at your own pace

Your story is great so far. I am enjoying it immensely and I can be a bit picky when it comes to some pf the stories I read. You're doing just fine. Don't feel like you have to get everything done and posted within some short time frame. Haste makes waste and all that. So don't worry about taking some time to hammer out the plot, characters, and other details to your satisfaction. Just DO NOT give up on your story.

Pace

While more frequent chapter is definitely welcome; and I don't think anyone would want you to quit because of losing motivation, don't rush just simply to satisfy people who are impatient. You are a gifted writer, and quality almost always beats speed and quantity.

Your gift to us! Get it the way you want it.

Take your time, please yourself first, your story to tell. We will wait.

I have several that I wait for,... gladly. There is always something new to enjoy. I just mark my place in them and check back often.

Thank You for your time, talent, energy, and your gift.

The story is good ... but

... but i guess from my perspective author raised the quality standard with the 1st story so high that this one beying simply good does not cut it.

True Craftsmen don't rush their work

Ripper fish, please do not become discouraged with the pace of your writing. Very few successful, professional, full-time writers produce more than one book per year. You wrote UASS in 4 months in your SPARE TIME! Your reasonable fans recognize that "life happens" - work, family, your state of health, and other pressures impact the amount of spare time that you can devote to your writing. Your comments at the beginning of each chapter make it obvious that you are driven to write and that you take great pride in your efforts. I suspect that you get motivation from the joy, respect, and encouragement expressed by your readers. It would be foolish to sacrifice any of that for the sake of expediancy. You are writing about a new world from the view point of the alians, and your life situation is likely different than it was 2+ years ago - give yourself a break - it may take a little longer to achieve the same level of quality that you provided in your previous story. I, like most of your readers will happily wait.

Thank you for your excellent storytelling - you ARE a true Craftsmen.

John

This is a great story and like most good writers this one has the ability to transport you there. I agree the good writer should not rush but we are waiting with baited breath. I have no idea what that means except please hurry up, lol.
I come here to see if there's an update.
I grade you 169/169.
Well done, Ripper, well done.

Nice job!

The tension was pretty thick there, I mean obviously it wouldn't be too late (what's the point of writing that?) but I could see a mad scramble if there was very little time.

The personalities are jelling more, becoming more defined. Excellent job with M'peth and how she treated Chep. LOL, sorry, too easy for me to envision him as "Chip" or "Chet", one of those sweater-draped-over-pastel-colored-polo-shirt wearing bitches from the 90's :D
Of course he's not all bluster, but his attitude still rankles.
Ben being off kilter is an amazing - and completely legit - character trait; then add Angela and you've got a really cool and dynamic character. *tips hat*
Thanks for writing, am looking forward to more!
Jason

Well Done

Excellent story RF, can tell it´s going to be another great endeavor on your part...Thank You, by the way for writing for "Our" enjoyment...you on PATREON yet, if not get on it as soon as you can, well worth it for all of us and a good way to express our thanks.