All Comments on 'Camel Toe Incest'

Not a bad story. Interesting content. Fairly (though not totally) believable. But, enuf so that I had only one hand available to navigate down the page. Thanx for your effort.

Because I don't like stories of people forcing sex I almost didn't read the story... But I am glad I did... Good story. Thanks for sharing.

This is a very good story and is a true fantasy of mine. You wrote it well, but need to do a spell check before you submit it.

Tonny

good story continue writing them

Very creative fun story to read. What else do you have up in that mind of yours? Send it our way!

oh my shit that was a great story keep writting

great story as is all the ones of yours that I have read. I think that you have a real talent.

It seems that more chapters on this story would be a great addition. His daughter is sure to have some friends that needs to have some education.

That was incredable, you should expand on this story, thanks.

your very good, I felt like i was a fly on the wall at times other times I was her, wishing i been taken by my daddy

One of the best stories I've read here! Great stuff! ;-)

This was a very hot story...absolutely amazing

Like the story line and keep the daughter learning. she should do it all with her daddy.

NO need to change ANYTHING - like a good porn, no storyline is needed - its not a soapopera u r writing so K.I.S.S (Keep It Sweet and Simple) - less is more - keep writing the good stuff...

So sweet. Everything is exactly right. Keep writing.

Good story, good developement. I also loved the way you left it hung so there may be more to the installment.

Perhaps "Daddy" could explore his daughters asshole before tuesday!!!! Pumping her again and again back there, before taking a video!!

damn this story is hot

You have a way with words, my friend. I loved every second of this story.

like it was my daughter

Great read!

this was a good read although there could have been more juicy details

don't get any smart ideas. If she agrees to fucking because she won't suck, that doesn't mean she wants to. Dangerous story.. but definitely enjoyed it.

Great story great ending the only way i would see to make it better is if he gave it her in the ass. Yeah!!!

It sometimes makes an old man do crazy things. I would thing it was a sweet tasting little pussy. Thanks for the story...............Rich

I thought that books of this type are easy to read, but with every minute of reading this story was given me a

boner that stiffen up to extra large proportions and want

to fuck all day long, by reminding this story and the

people of this story. Ohh GOD while reading this I have

to jerk off every time. Please get me more of this kind

of stories. I like it very very much

I loved that Daddy forced her. I would have loved it even more if she fought him. Of course, the fighting would have turned to begging for more once she got that cock in her pussy real good. Rape me, Daddy. I love it.

Need to be a bit more careful, in the beginning of the story you referred to the skirt as pants. The rest of the story was really good so I'm sure not many people noticed it.

it was great story, but i feel you should have carried a bit further in the story when it came to how things would change in the future of father and daughter. and i also feel you should have carried the story until tuesday when mother was due home. well written though.

YOU PEOPLE ARE ALL A BUNCH OF FREAKIN SICK FACED PERVS. I HOPE ALL OF U GET TOSSED IN THE JOINT WHERE ALL THE INMATES WILL HAVE THEIR WAY WITH U IN THE WORSE WAY POSSIBLE!!! I WOULDNT SURPRISED ME IF THAT GIRL WAS SCREAMING IN PAIN ON THE INSIDE

CUZ HER LIFE IS NOW RUINED!!! SHE PROBLY WILL HANG HERSELF BE SO SHE NEVER GOES THRU THAT AGAIN AND IT WILL BE ALL OF U PEOPLES FAULT!! DONT DROP THE SOAP FREAKS CUZ I NOW WHO ALL OF U ARE , EMAILS FACES ADRESSES AND NAMES AND I JUST SENT THE INFO TO THE COPS!! THIS IS NOT A BLUFF!! IM AN EX HACKER SO I PUT THOSE SKILLS TO GOOD USE. AND FOR ICNING ON THE CAKE I SENT FIVE TO TEN TXT BOMBS TO ALL OF U SO HAV FUN GETTIN OUT OF A DEBT WORTH THOUSANDS AND THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS!! ITS PEOPLE LIKE U THAT MAKE MY CONSCIENCE STRONGER AND MY JOB A WHOLE LOT EASIER!!

look in 1 asshole, your on the same page as the rest of us cocksuck!!! u hypocrite, its just a fantasy (well most of em i guess). either way its just thoughts and fantasies from peoples' minds and as there are no "thought police" and shouldn't be so u need 2 BACK THE FUCK OFF, JACKASS!!!!!!!

This was a good hot story. I prefer the mom/son and brother sister better but this one was good. Thank you for writing.

Very good story line, there is nothing like incest. But you should take your time as you ease into the story, don't try to make it all fit on one page. Extend it, ease into the story, tell us about the characters, make us want to read on.

used 'red' way to much....he can't be looking at her thong and pussy on his stomache ...there was no camel toe and its the name of the story...he's is so much pain but moving all over and holding her down with his legs

....way too much happening and no consistancy..and the throw in sentances about the mom serve no purpose