Here "Comes" The Bride

prefictable..

And obviously the groom is her long lost brother... Terrible story and bad grammar. Get an editor kid.

it was wonderful

Future hubby was aware what was happening. Dad has spoken to him and told him what he has always wanted , He thought about it and decided to let DAD have it, After it was all over Dad texted him to come in and tell daughter. Keeping daddy happy for years to come.

Good Story

Its the start of a good story. I'll be waiting for the next part so see how this ends.

Hot enough

ignore the trolls. But I hope you plan a sequel, the end was too abrupt and unexplained.

3*

Luv your pic btw.

More content please

Please give us some more of this story - let us have the hubby-to-be join in on a threesome - then maybe the groom's mother - eh?

Oh I do hope there's more to come,,,this part is perfect,,a gift every bride should give her father,,so please let's have the next installment.

Short but Sweet.

Love your story! Would like to see this storyline continue. Love the twist her wanting this also. This is the first of your works I have read and look forward to reading your other work.Thank you!

Please continue

Got me going, but now I want to see them both use her like she deserves!!

Your beautiful baby

Wasn't aware that she had a baby!

Stopped reading right there.