Yep, please give us that atlas if you've already started working on it. Doubt it will have the same impact as a full story, but could serve as a good taster between chapters.
Oh, and you forgot to prefix this chapter with 'Ch: 03' (your earlier efforts were both titled in this manner) which may cause the chapter to be listed out of sync with the others on your profile page.
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Anonymous01/25/17
more, longer and harder
Always glad to see a new writer. Do NOT listen to haters. The most read stories have lots of negative comments.
Writer longer chapters. Period. Short stories usually fail to provided the character's motivations, weaknesses, etc. They go from being absolute virgins to yelling every obscenity in the world in two short paragraphs???? Silkstockinglover is a great writer (no, not me) who does cuckold, gay, lesbian, interracial, etc. He is prolific and gets lots of readers and good scores.
Good luck.
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Anonymous01/25/17
Love it!
This is easily the hottest story I've ever read, it's got everything! Chapter 2 was the best but the cuckold stuff in this one really got me going too. Would love to hear or similar stories but also updates on Billy and Shawndy. More unshaven women would be really hot too.
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Anonymous01/25/17
More pls
Most of all some feminization would make this even hotter.
I would love it if the lifestyle continues to spread, faster and faster, perhaps to a point where cheap cages start to appear in big supermarkets, "chastity shops" pop up where men can get a custom fitted stainless steel cage, and more and more people become huge fans of a cuckold and male chastity lifestyle.
I would also love to see more about that frightening German woman and in particular about her son.. Even the full toilet thing sounds hot in the context of this story.
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Anonymous02/04/17
Great Stuff
Great addition, but i agree with the others that it is't long enough, you need longer to explore the stories.
Also really enjoyed the punishment opening, a great follow on that really fitted the story. Maybe some Feminisation?
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Yep, please give us that atlas if you've already started working on it. Doubt it will have the same impact as a full story, but could serve as a good taster between chapters.
Oh, and you forgot to prefix this chapter with 'Ch: 03' (your earlier efforts were both titled in this manner) which may cause the chapter to be listed out of sync with the others on your profile page.
more, longer and harder
Always glad to see a new writer. Do NOT listen to haters. The most read stories have lots of negative comments.
Writer longer chapters. Period. Short stories usually fail to provided the character's motivations, weaknesses, etc. They go from being absolute virgins to yelling every obscenity in the world in two short paragraphs???? Silkstockinglover is a great writer (no, not me) who does cuckold, gay, lesbian, interracial, etc. He is prolific and gets lots of readers and good scores.
Good luck.
Love it!
This is easily the hottest story I've ever read, it's got everything! Chapter 2 was the best but the cuckold stuff in this one really got me going too. Would love to hear or similar stories but also updates on Billy and Shawndy. More unshaven women would be really hot too.
More pls
Most of all some feminization would make this even hotter.
I would love it if the lifestyle continues to spread, faster and faster, perhaps to a point where cheap cages start to appear in big supermarkets, "chastity shops" pop up where men can get a custom fitted stainless steel cage, and more and more people become huge fans of a cuckold and male chastity lifestyle.
I would also love to see more about that frightening German woman and in particular about her son.. Even the full toilet thing sounds hot in the context of this story.
Great Stuff
Great addition, but i agree with the others that it is't long enough, you need longer to explore the stories.
Also really enjoyed the punishment opening, a great follow on that really fitted the story. Maybe some Feminisation?
Anyway, great stuff, looking forward to more.
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