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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/03/17

I chose B. Love your other stories as well

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by Anonymous02/03/17

A

Definitely a

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by Anonymous02/03/17

A!!!

Seriously though - A

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by Anonymous02/03/17

lol Fuck the staff. He just ganked titanium chains up like it was floss. Run forest run! B!

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Ooooo so hard to chose!!

I like the idea of option A but option Ben could be interesting as well!!! Please keep writing you've got not just me hooked I'm sure!!

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by Anonymous02/03/17

A all the way

You know we want A! You're a great writer. Please hurry back

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by geemeedee02/03/17

A, but only if he kills her irritating ass immediately. If he's going to use her for his "heat," go with B instead.

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by Anonymous02/03/17

I choose C

Just then she remembered the emergency button strapped to her wrist.
she presses it and his cell was engulfed in flames, the SWAT team was notified and the armored doors protecting the room closed...

Seriously we all know you'll go with A so he'll fuck her, but a top secret facility with no contingency plans but fuck your mates or get fucked? LAME

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by erotichaven02/03/17

You weren't exaggerating the big difference. Though you had to know you posted this story on a site that praises nonconsent. B. I would agree with the below Anon, but I don't think the lab is that developed or made to hold whatever it is. The story said that. I would vote A because this is her problem. She brought it on herself but I don't like the direction of nonconsent so B for me.

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by clarketoni02/03/17

Decisions decisions

Either way you will have us all reading it as it is really good. So I say Authors choice

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by Anonymous02/03/17

ugh

ignore the below dickfags. 1. i like this character woman instead of the same tired cliche. it's always tough woman or soft woman. crazy supernatural lady? i'll take her. please continue. and im not sure if anon even read what you wrote. does she think this is the CIA futuristic labs of tomorrows or something? hell, where can i sign up for this??? Oh, and B lol

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by Anonymous02/03/17

a

A

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by Anonymous02/04/17

Chase!

B!

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by Buffysangel02/04/17

A

A all the way

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by Anonymous02/04/17

A

Definitely choice A

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by Katatonix02/05/17

Such a great read so far, and definitely choice A!

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by gumdropz02/06/17

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

ALLS THE A'SSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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B. I mean, why be stingy? Don't other lab-people need sex too? He seems fit enough to spread it round a little - come on - have a heart!

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by SisterRobin02/06/17

Interesting

B. Let her try to save her hide... Allowing him to hunt her down as she deserves.

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by icanmakeuthrob02/06/17

Awwwwww yeah

Loving it! I vote for A

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by Anonymous02/07/17

Vote

Loving it... good job! Vote B for me.

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by ouevre02/07/17

Good job, saints.

Saints, because that's what you all are, right? We chose A to righteously spare lives, right? *wink, wink* Honestly, I didn't expect anyone to choose B, yet many did under the passionate hope of a dogged chase. Heh. One person voted A through email, one person voted B through email. A won by 1. 10/9. Worthy of noting, If a comment does not clearly express which option they want, I void them.

To anon: Thank you for defending my honor, but I do aim to keep a tame comment section. If someone believes the content of the story/decisions to be 'lame,' let them. I write for fun, not a grade, and no part of me is fazed by negative remarks. Besides, I sometimes agree. For instance, I'm with geemee, Jai is beyond annoying. And she'll just get worse, hahaha. To everyone else, glad you liked it. Keep on keeping on~

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by Anonymous02/10/17

b

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by Anonymous02/10/17

Loved it!

Definitely A

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by Anonymous02/25/17

B

But A works too, I'm so fucking scared

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