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Where Next
Fascinating story. Many intersections ahead. Hope the girl grows up fast and wise, not smart!
Good but short chapter
It has come to light the capricious character of spoiled girl Jane, but Paul has managed to handle the situation correctly.
What does Jane think? She does not realize that Paul is a widowed father and with two daughters to raise? It seems that Jane only thinks of her amusement, although Paul seems to have put she with the feet to earth.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
Pleasantly surprised
I have enjoyed this story very much so far. As a result, I've just read the rest of your catalogue. As a very few other authors on this site know, I rarely comment and then only positively. I like the creativity of the writing, which meets my approval by the way *chuckles, and the eroticism; perfect for a romance story. Just . . . keep going, you have a new fan in me.
Promising
I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to future chapters. Keep it up.
Can't Wait
I am excited to read Part 3.
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