All Comments on 'What Did You Expect?'

LOL

Amusing story, I enjoyed the entire air of bewilderment.

Reminded me so much of someone I used to know years ago. This would have happened to her and you told it like she would.

Man,

That was excellent. I am sure you will do very well in the competition.

*Winks*

"It's the 'tail' that matters...I meant 'tale'...hehehe...

like your witty style of writing, intriguing...(~_*)GOOD LUCK!!

You could have called her Fred and this story would still have been sizzling LOL

I love your writing style cat ;-)

I love the improvs., and yours was exceptional.

I really enjoyed this, very funny! Good luck!

Best of luck with the comp!!!!!

;-)

A curious little thing. A fascinating premise and a terrible let down. What's missing is any sort of emotional rsponse on her part other than a mildy disinterested complacency while she's being fingered to orgasm in front of an audience of staring strangers. That's where the interest should be, and we don't get anything about that. I can't believe anyone would be so totally indifferent and unimpressed with being homosexually seduced in public. Indifferent people have indifferent sex.