All Comments on 'Christmas Present'

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loveloverloveloverover 7 years ago
Hard

She never stopped. Will she need others?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
HOT

Don't stop now! Vivid fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Like it

I like it alot

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 7 years ago
@hardlover

I agree...it seems to me that's where this is headed..Her libido is up and he's taking cialis, it says it all. Too bad, I would prefer to have stopped the story right here. I would have put this in the 'Loving Wife' category. Gotta really love your man lots to have that much anal activity. So part two, she becomes an anal slut?

TamaboneTamaboneover 7 years ago
Love it

Absolutely loved this story. Can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome

Great story very exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
1*

illiterate shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5

annony is full of shit He fucking loves these stories. He reads them all!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
Very Good!!

Other than some spelling/grammar and punctuation errors, I loved every bit of it!! I hope part 2 is as good (or dare I say better?).

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
common phrases repeated far too often - very distracting.

little minx for example repeated so many time distracting - good way to lose reader's interest

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