All Comments on 'Desire'

That was a real quickie, and I loved it

If writing this made you wet....wellll, it's your body...and your call.

His patter seemed a little thin to me?

I was with your story as she began...but...maybe he's simply

smoother than I am? :+))

She was READY so soon?

Good phone sex matches and surpasses this?

Nice language level...and environment details.

I have to disagree with KingCuddle. Nice compact writing and a tight focus.