The Long Weekend - Day 01

very good start

the build up was very good, I hope day 2 is just as good as day 1

Very good

This story was very enjoyable to read . From the beginning to the of this part you brought the characters together very well. It was written very well. Looking forward to the next part. I was very happy with the build-up and the way this part ended.

SB

Hot

I normally don't leave comments but I really enjoyed this! Thanks!

Erotica, not porn

This is well writen - the sex doesn't start until the is 2/3 of the way through, although you know these women are going to have sex any second.

The trove of Aussie slang combined with the European elegance is an effective and interesting contrast.

I'm looking forward to additional chapters.

well f me sideways I'm rapidly getting a new favorite author! Feels real, no BS, no tired tropes, just great storytelling.

Well done!

A very fun story! Thank you!

A very sexy start indeed.

Aussie Aussie Aussie...lol

Loving your stories more and more as i make my way down your list of submissions.

You got a fan here.

Much thanks from this Melbournian
xo

Nice story so far

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing it with us.