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Why suddenly change category?
Why suddenly change category? After 6 parts in "Mature" why suddenly change the story to LW? The writer tryed to explained it, but wasn't convincing...wasn't she a wife in those other parts? Is he really expecting that we will read the other 6 parts so we can understand why she says: "My husband is a great husband and father, always provides for me, is there when I am down and can never do enough for our three children"! And then what does she think a such wonderful husband deserves? To be cheated and treated like a wimp! Not a chance in hell! Read this part was bad enough! 1*
This has been a marvellous story ...
.. but somehow it seems to have lost its way. This might have worked better as the first chapter of a different tale. I still think your writing is excellent, but this chapter has been a bit of a disappointment. Only three stars today.
Good fun!
I thought that the story was cute. I especially like the humorous ending :)
I guess the girls can swap robes again LOL.
hlg
A Great Series!
I waited to comment until I had read all 7. They are really good. I like the way people in their 60's a portrayed as sexy & adventurous.
I hope there will be more to come.
Such a wonderful series
Jacqueline your first foray into erotic writing is excellent. You have a wonderful way with words and are very descriptive. I found myself closing my eyes and picturing your scenes, it was all very stimulating to say the least. You are my favorite author. Don't let criticism deter you, keep up your style and write for yourself. I had some strange comments with my first attempts posting here, but I didn't pay attention to them and kept writing for myself. I found so many others enjoyed my stories and didn't dwell on the few criticisms. Keep sharing, you are special.
yet another 5* story
No matter to my wife and myself that the author has changed categories - who cares, its her choice. We have loved every story and this was so very horny and as good as nay before it. Glad that hubby is getting some pleasure and some new experiences. The sexual awakening of a mature woman is a very horny and sexy genre and we look forward to being aroused by more erotic stories by this excellent author. S & P
Inexorably satisfying
Dear Jacqueline1951!
Your stories move inexorable towards the realization of the fantasies you have aroused in my being as you concretise the carnal expectations you build in my manly bosom, and I fly carefree to sensual satisfaction. Such sprightly joy flows into an otherwise drab existence and I sigh with deep satisfaction.
Lorencino (1947)
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