It was a Monday morning when I first saw him, my husband and I had only recently moved to the area and while he was at work I was home unpacking, not that I minded I like to unpack things and organise them, but I digress, as I was unpacking the boxes I sa
That's one "sentence."
I stopped reading right there, scrolled to the end, and gave this a well deserved 1.
BTW, this is a quick and dirty edit.
It was a Monday morning when I first saw him. My husband and I had only recently moved to the area, and while he was at work I was home unpacking, not that I minded. I like to unpack things and organise them. But I digress. As I was unpacking the boxes I saw my neighbour for the first time. He was was toned and muscular but tall, which gave him some leanness and made him look deceptively weaker than he actually was.
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Anonymous01/22/17
Good start
Not a bad beginning but it needs to go somewhere.add another installment and I may mark that one higher.
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Anonymous01/23/17
Nice
Nice story and there wasn't really any physical sex involved, please update if anything further happens.
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It was a Monday morning when I first saw him, my husband and I had only recently moved to the area and while he was at work I was home unpacking, not that I minded I like to unpack things and organise them, but I digress, as I was unpacking the boxes I sa
That's one "sentence."
I stopped reading right there, scrolled to the end, and gave this a well deserved 1.
BTW, this is a quick and dirty edit.
It was a Monday morning when I first saw him. My husband and I had only recently moved to the area, and while he was at work I was home unpacking, not that I minded. I like to unpack things and organise them. But I digress. As I was unpacking the boxes I saw my neighbour for the first time. He was was toned and muscular but tall, which gave him some leanness and made him look deceptively weaker than he actually was.
Good start
Not a bad beginning but it needs to go somewhere.add another installment and I may mark that one higher.
Nice
Nice story and there wasn't really any physical sex involved, please update if anything further happens.
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