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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I enjoy that you are getting onto the Gray Jedi path. We know where Rex ends up, do you plan on explaining how he links up with Wolf and Gregor?

Great job with this series, I am constantly looking forward to what the next chapter has to offer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sex or story

I can't decide if I'm reading this for the sex or the story... They are both compelling! Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
more more more

A dangerous path follow you do, young writer... Expectations and anxiousness you you are rising in the readers heart.. Fail them, you must not ...

Now fuckin hurry with P6... ☺

Between nice twist in the end, didn't expect you anyway to grand my wish so easily to introduce Ahsoka.

Keep writing,

Lucia

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great work

Hell, the sex part has taken a major back seat, and im loving the story. Keep up the awesome work.

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