All Comments on 'My Trip to the Doctor Ch. 02'

unusual storyline but very entertaining and super hot. Waiting for the next installment.

i like your story so far. i just hope we don't have to wait a another year for the next chapter

"My routine is wake up and go jerk off, get home from school and go jerk off, eat dinner and then go jerk off, get ready for bed then jerk off once or twice"

This kid has a right arm like POPEYE!

I almost gave up hope to see this one continue but then you bring in this beast, the kinkiness just went up and up! Love to see some serious openness between mother & son and the start of their relationship, even more I love the possible (damn I really hope so) relationship Harry could have with Sarah. It would give him the chance to experience a lot of things he was deprived from and she seems to genuinely like him.

The only real complaint I have is the constant repeating of names of characters in scenes where they are the only one present, like "Monica this" or "Monica that". Change a couple of Monicas with her, the mother, MILF ect. and you'll have an even better story.

In the end I still this with a 5*!

Just try to post a new chapter sooner.

Like some here I'm glad too see the story continue. I like that after two chapters nothing major had happened but you built on the suspense. Too many authors go right for the kill, keep up the good pace..make it a struggle inching closer to the final climax

........for the inevitable, mom and son getting together!

i hope it does not take another year for another update of this story

Don't wait another year to put out another story. Keep this going! Love the premise!

Glad to see you back in action! Keep it cumming.

Please dont wait another year for the next chapter you have a great talent in writing these and maybe start athother few series....im looking forward to the next chapters

Great second chapter but had to read the first chapter again to remind myself of the story. Hope to read the next chapter sooner this time, please!

Please do another soon! This series is amazing!

This is an amazing series. Very well written and thought out. I hope you'll be continuing this series soon! Can't wait....

Who was watching monica on the bed?

I can't wait another year between chapters.

Sure, it's fantasy, I know, lol. But, stuff like making Harry strip completely naked in the waiting room 'cause "It's easier this way." All they needed was access to his cock, which is pretty easy to get to without removing anything. Or the "need" for him to cum three times into the collection device? What are they gonna do with all that semen, lol? The situations always seem to be absurd in the extreme. It wouldn't be much different if, during a physical, my doctor instructed me to don a spiderman costume in order to get accurate medical results, lol.

Again, I'm simply curious as to the appeal.

It's great to read a different version of a very familiar storyline. I found it interesting to say the least, isn't realise the time between the two stories as I read them back to back but I implore you that the next chapter is sooner rather than later !!!!!

Has a perfectly good, real, cock ready to take care of her and she sends him away so she can maturbate??? How fucked up is that, especially after she not only watched him cum but also sucked him off?

please continue this story if you would.

I liked reading about his condition, but I wished the characters acted in a more realistic way.

When will you write a new chapter

Will we see part three anytime soon?

Agree with other comments. where are chapters 3 & 4?

Great job!

Good follow-up to the 1st Chapter...I'm intrigue to find out where you're going with this.

The only thing that really got to me is the constant repeating of the characters names. For example, Monica's masturbation session... "her" and "she" would have been enough. And why call her a MILF, just seemed weird coming from the "narrator".

Josie : )

I would eat and drink that cock every day and night until he collapsed lol

For example:

1.

" "You poor woman, such a beautiful body, yet so neglected." Doctor Travis huffed in frustration.

"For fuck's sake Sarah, either fuck the two of them or shut up! I'm working here!" Sarah recoiled from the doctor's outburst... "

It should be:

" "You poor woman, such a beautiful body, yet so neglected."

Doctor Travis huffed in frustration: "For fuck's sake Sarah, either fuck the two of them or shut up! I'm working here!"

Sarah recoiled from the doctor's outburst... "

2.

"Sarah, you're killing me here." Said Doctor Travis with amusement in her tone.

"Sorry doctor, you know how I get sometimes." Sarah took a seat in the back of the room. Doctor Travis continued

"Okay back to the questions..." Suddenly Harry lurched forward"

It should be:

"Sarah, you're killing me here." Said Doctor Travis with amusement in her tone.

"Sorry doctor, you know how I get sometimes." Sarah took a seat in the back of the room.

Doctor Travis continued: "Okay back to the questions..."

Suddenly Harry lurched forward..."

I love those two stories, hope there will be another part or more than one ;)

Keep writing it was a great story, keep it going

Please more!! It is so hot!!

This chapter was published almost 2 years ago. Since you're still writing, there's hope that you'll submit a new chapter soon.

Gave it a Avg= 4 being 5 for the story and 3 for leaving us hanging and not continuing it to the next chapter!

this is one of the best stories I've read on literotica, why would you not keep going? I see you posted something else about 8 months ago. I sincerely hope you come back to this one. It's amazing.

Pls more it has so much potential

Be warned!!! This is a cock tease story. There won't be another chapter from this cock tease author.

This needs another 4 chapters!

Damn hot- wish you had written more chapters

You written several stories this year ! Why haven't you written more chapters on this story ?

What a Great story!!!! Definitely needs another chapter.

Please continue

Look forward to reading reading more. Very nice storyline

Would enjoy a third chapter expanding on the relationship with Sarah.

Awesome story weird how a man can cum so many times, you need to continue with this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice. Needs another chapter or 2. Want to know what happens next.

Please give us another chapter!

Excellent story. Very well written. Needs a few more chapters. Harry finally getting with his mother and then with Sarah. Also his 'treatment'. Maybe he fucks the doctor too.

I hope you are adding more to this story it is an excellent read.

We need more chapters, please

please write more chapters