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English
I tried to do
something like this a while ago....
Now I see what it should have looked like
beautiful
romantic
gentle
whispers in Spanish.......
muy bueno senorita
Me gusta mucho
las lenguas juntas. Should this:
and hold you, hold you though dying night
be through the night? Good work
minimum
Glad you kept the Spanish to a minimum. Each Spanish word had more impact that way and blended more smoothly into the poem.
i love
this poem
Lovely
Soft and flowing, liquid beauty...well done!
~Merry
utterly
beautiful ... "para tú" maybe should have been "para tí" ... but piddling business, that. God this is a lovely piece of art.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.
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