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The First SaR Mission Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/23/17

Thanks!

For dropping the flags. Much easier to read now. Interesting details about how to manage in such extreme conditions. Fascinating.

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by Anonymous01/23/17

Better

I have only, one problem: excessive use of, commas.

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by Anonymous01/24/17

Great Story

This is really an excellent werewolf story with a different twist to it. It is very well written with an excellent plot and excellent character development. Also your description of rescue technices is very good and realistic. I am waiting for your next chapter to see if the injuried are turned to save their lives and Anna requests to be changed to be with her family. Great story, please finish it. Retired Army NCO

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by bierce01/24/17

Love the story

Just one request. Turn them.

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