You write a stupid story in the second person. I don't read it, I just give you a one. You cry, covering your pathetic eyes with your fists like a little kid. You are pathetic, and I laugh at you.
Why the second person? She was there since the beginning...This story is bad, but in the second person is even worst...1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
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Anonymous01/24/17
Who wrote this?
12 years old and married? Or someone who works in a shoe store?
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Anonymous01/24/17
who is he writing to
are you writing the story to your wife or the public your way of telling he story is garbage
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Anonymous01/24/17
Good Story
It cracks me up how some people on here criticize others on their writing style.
If you're looking for a Pulitzer Prize writer go to the library. This site is for people sharing stories and having fun with it. So to all you losers out there living in your parents basement with no jobs and no girlfriend get over yourself.
To all of you who like sharing your stories keep writing and ignored these losers who think their New York Times critics.
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Anonymous01/24/17
Fun Story.
I have to agree with that last statement. The losers on here go from story to story criticizing each story. If you're such a good writer write one of your own OH thats right you can because you have NO girlfriend or wife just a blowup doll in your mommy's basement and probably can't get it up anymore.
Back to the story, Looking forward to part 2
My wife and I do little things like this to spice up our marriage. The exhibition part not the sex part. She likes to show off that's it.
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Anonymous01/24/17
Hot!
Loved it!
Will there be a part 2??
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Anonymous01/25/17
2.77
Not exactly a score that cries, read me, read me. Wonder who the real losers here are, the ones that call out shit stories, or the ones that complain about the guys that call out these shit stories? All you losers step forward and be counted. LOL Idiots.
English
Hey, shit for brains
You write a stupid story in the second person. I don't read it, I just give you a one. You cry, covering your pathetic eyes with your fists like a little kid. You are pathetic, and I laugh at you.
Why the second person?
Why the second person? She was there since the beginning...This story is bad, but in the second person is even worst...1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
Who wrote this?
12 years old and married? Or someone who works in a shoe store?
who is he writing to
are you writing the story to your wife or the public your way of telling he story is garbage
Good Story
It cracks me up how some people on here criticize others on their writing style.
If you're looking for a Pulitzer Prize writer go to the library. This site is for people sharing stories and having fun with it. So to all you losers out there living in your parents basement with no jobs and no girlfriend get over yourself.
To all of you who like sharing your stories keep writing and ignored these losers who think their New York Times critics.
Fun Story.
I have to agree with that last statement. The losers on here go from story to story criticizing each story. If you're such a good writer write one of your own OH thats right you can because you have NO girlfriend or wife just a blowup doll in your mommy's basement and probably can't get it up anymore.
Back to the story, Looking forward to part 2
My wife and I do little things like this to spice up our marriage. The exhibition part not the sex part. She likes to show off that's it.
Hot!
Loved it!
Will there be a part 2??
2.77
Not exactly a score that cries, read me, read me. Wonder who the real losers here are, the ones that call out shit stories, or the ones that complain about the guys that call out these shit stories? All you losers step forward and be counted. LOL Idiots.
fantasy guy
Cute story . Part 2 should get better. Maybe in the future the wife turns the tables on hubby, and he has to put out. LOL
I used to be an old shoe dog..
this does go on. not in cheap shoe store.. one that prides itself on service at what ever the cost is
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