All Comments on 'National Nude Day 2004'

WHY AM I NOT IN THIS STORY?!

I DEMAND TO BE IN THIS STORY AS A YOUNG TRANSEXUAL GIGOLO!!!

i am ver surpise. you have made a story base on somthing yet that poeple have posted

Wow...now that is the place to live! Good luck!

...point of view had been consistent. There was too much shifting of person between second (you) and third (he/she). In many ways, though, it was very clever.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

I wish there was a way to actually have a National Nude Day.

I wish your story had been longer, w/ either more sex encounters or longer ones. After I got into the theme I enjoyed it very much, and it sounded like a dream you may have had.