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This got weird....
here I was expecting a nice tale of sibling love with potential 3rd party in form of their cousin only to see a sex crazed tale where the brother punches his sisters pussy like he's auditioning for the next MMA championship. I get the whole "truth or dare" spiel but the falcon punch to the vagina is a mood killer for me. Not so sure about the whole love side of things either, sis did tell him she loves him but then again she has this on-going think with their cousin...who's playing who here?
Guess and hope the upcoming chapter(s) clarify all of that.
Gave you a 4*.
So hot
I think this story is hot as hell. Can't wait for the next chapter. As long as the parents don't get involved or anything, I think that would kind of ruin it. It's so much hotter when they have to worry about being caught, and trying to hide it.
Fucking Awesome
I can barely catch my breath.
I enjoyed this chapter
Even the pussy punching. That was freaky, but exciting. I don't think you need to involve the parents. (Do it if you want to. It's your story.) But, I think Mom should make it clear that she knows that sex is going on between the kids. Maybe she's fine with that because she used to have sex with Julia's father (or mother, or both)! That revelation could come at the very end. I just do t think the kids have done a very good job of covering up their sex play. And the parents don't seem stupid.
The story with Julia and the itching powder makes her seem dangerously sociopathic and evil. Holy crap!
I am really confused.
Is this just a reposting of your story "A Back Rub For Julia Ch. 04" because it matches word for word. At first I thought you were reposting "Three is a Magic Number" under a slightly different title. Now I am just confused trying to figure out what you are doing. ???
Just wait ,be patient
It is building up a little at a time be patient , it gets better and more intense
I have loved this story from the beginning 3 Chapters.
This was extra hot. I'm so glad you have added some more of the story of these three horn dogs. I was uncomfortable with the "punch" to her cunt, but love the slap to her ass, and the pussy slap, and her reaction to both. Good story ScottFree. Moving on to the next Chapter. HOT!
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