Don't know if there was supposed to be more of the story in this chapter - this last page had two sets of the same information, one following the other...
Still, A GOOD STORY!
As much as I like the rapidity with which new chapters appear, I do feel a little more editing is desirable. There were several paragraphs repeated on the last page.
English
I noticed a little glitch -
Don't know if there was supposed to be more of the story in this chapter - this last page had two sets of the same information, one following the other...
Still, A GOOD STORY!
Great story
As much as I like the rapidity with which new chapters appear, I do feel a little more editing is desirable. There were several paragraphs repeated on the last page.
I love The story
I love the story keep up the good work.
AUTHOR'S NOTE
THE COPY THE AUTHOR SUBMITTED TO LITEROTICA DID NOT CONTAIN DUPLICATE PARAGRAPHS (as found on p. 2 of the posted version). Sorry.
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