All Comments on 'Lecture On Gardening'

I really like this.

~and you will in parallel

grow wild with renegade roses

rising among fragrances

richer than fiction spawned

from untended seeds ~

That's a great finish

Nice work

Thank you

a neat combination of lecture and poem! I could use a lecture on gardening...

A well used metaphor

grown with interesting phrases,

and alliteration watered.

Good phrases such as:

"marvel instead of meddle"

"renegade roses"

when i think about your age, i'm amazed at the depth you have..

this was totally a joy to read.

xo

Earth lover's delight. Nicely done.