All Comments on 'Remote Controlled Valentine'

Let me know your thoughts.

I welcome constructive critiques, opinions and suggestions on areas where I can improve for your reading enjoyment.

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That was amazing, I loved it. Not too many grammar errors and no tricky wording or anything.

Couple of places you used a wrong name. Otherwise great.

I purchased a rechargable remote controlled vibrator for a female friend in her favorite color of purple. After charging it up I got to inserted it and we headed out for dinner. I had quite a fun time using it on our drive and during dinner. She enjoyed the surprise of each time when I buzzed her. On the drive to her place she wanted the full treatment of all 10 settings. It was quite an evening for both of us.

I just got my first vibe. I hope I have as much fun as Amy had!! Please keep writing, I love your work!!

Great story. Think my wife would enjoy being teased in this way.

4 good stories; too bad they quit writing :-(