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Oh my gawd
I nearly wet myself when I read the broom bit. Still laughing!
;-)
I had fun writing this one.
Thanks for your comment.
Horrofic and Humourous
This story will make you lock the door from the horror and laugh while you're doing it. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't know whether to laugh or cry
you've given me nightmares
Eeeew! I loved it!
My word, that was gleefully gruesome and fun! Good job!
Brilliant...
Twisted, funny at times sad but always entralling. A chilling tour of a psyche that is both evil and innocent. Well done.
Quite amazing....
Kept my attention from start to finish...certainly not for the squeamish, but brilliant!!
Nauseating, in a fresh and brillant way.
Sure, it's disgusting, even depressing, but not like it's in the romance category, now is it? This story is so unique in both style and substance that I come back and read it again every few months. I am still in awe. Even after multiple reads, it's still riveting, like one of those movies that you're don't enjoy watching but it is so good, so intense, you still can't look away.
Nice job
Awsome, sweet in a horrific way. Liked it.
Good Job!!
That was awesome!! Really good read freaked me out a bit though
100/100
Certainly something one just finds they have to read from start to finish. In fact I only got half way through before I, asked my other half if I could read him something. Really enjoyed by both of us, twistedly brilliant.
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