Some Sort of Hero

Throughout the entire chapter I was sighing dreamily with a happy smile. Then the end slapped me. Of course B

I should have seen it coming considering the description song. :P I choose B. As usual, I want all the consequences. I really like the dynamics of these two. You have a fan in me.

Down with A

A - If he wants to get close to her, and if she's in an abusive relationship, he'd better wait to say something. She's used to it by now, right?

You're an excellent writer. Like the others, I was hoping so hard for this to be a sweet love story. I hope it still can be. 5*s

waaay different from FLA. I was not expecting the difference. Also, like everybody else said, i was cracking up at their horrible humor. well not at the end i wasn't laughign then:( Please go with A. All Lorraines in the world must be protected.

B: for the rewards are much greater when earned

B. Either one could make a good story.

AAAAAAA

I really enjoy your style of writing. Good character development makes the payoff so much more consuming. Keep up the great work!

a

Love it!

B. You're such a beautiful writer!

Second

I second the below person. Your writing is gorgeous. I choose A. Keep up the good work.

B. I like the character development. Keep up the good work!

Answer

As a black pharmacy technician, I'm loving this story. The humor is fantastic. Do we get to know what happens with these choices? Otherwise I choose A. Trust or no trust, protectING is protecting

A

A

a please :)

Forgive me

fuck! I accidentally clicked 1 star. It's a good thing rating doesn't dissuade you. Does this mean my vote doesn't count? Because I think you should go with B.

I am in awe...

And feeling the barest hint of jealousy, because your work downright stunning. Well-written and effortless. Poetry. I'm floored by your character development, which is something not seen very often on this site! Thank you!

I choose A because I like to watch things crash and burn, and how the pieces get put back together!

Looking forward to more!

awe times ten!! your writing is so refreshing. i vote A, crash crash crash

A please

Great story......more please!!!!!! I say go with A.

Good job, saviors.

As per usual, thank you for all of the kind comments. And thank you for voting, no matter the star amount. To the 1-starring naysayers, I wish you well and may you happen upon heavy black on white porn elsewhere.

Three A voters from email, four B voters from email. A won by 3. 14/11. May be a couple days before I submit Pt. 02 because life, but FLA Pt. 04 is almost ready for submission.

Voting is now closed.

Intrigued

You said you hated this story and I was surprised. How unusual, perhaps this was why I started reading it. I like it so far; there is something different about it.