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Christmas Present Pt. 02

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by Anonymous

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by tentaclesforall01/24/17

Excellent story in desperate need of some serious proof-reading/editing

Love your imagination, that's one hot story, but it's let down a bit by the many mistakes in the text.

I suggest looking around for an editor or at least some proof-readers.

Looking forward to reading many more stories from you!

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by dreamer336601/24/17

Fetish?

At the rate she's having piercings done, I think she's out of control. The category should be changed from anal to fetish.

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by Anonymous01/25/17

Love the decent

I absolutely love these kind of stories where wife descends into slutdom and tattoos and piercings. Please continue with more visible tattoos my personal fetish and may be a shaved side under cut extreme hair cut . If minx could take over her life it would be cool thanks again i love these stories please continue.

Best regards

Fred

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by phoenix23ninja01/29/17

Corset piercings

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corset_piercing#

I c anyone is interested in them, read the article first

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by Anonymous02/25/17

Please continue or write a new story I keep being drawn back to this story. Maybe it could start to impact on her work and social life?

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