All Comments on 'The Smile Did It'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

I enjoy your writing and I look forward to reading more of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
HoT

With a capital T.....I masturbated to this 5 star story....keep it up Brittany.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 7 years ago
Absolutely Steamy Hot

Five Stars Britt! Where is the six star button when a fellow needs it?

I think your experience that night was absolutely magical and I am happy the readers get the benefit of reliving it with you in your lovely lurid descriptions. The Sapphic connection between two women is an especially beautiful thing and I think you captured that same beauty adeptly in your prose. I also enjoyed the fact you got deep in Shane's head with your words and made him work hard for that climax. Male or female, a reader cannot help but find this story piping hot! More like this please.

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerabout 7 years ago
Hot

Another hot story. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5 stars

So so hot! You have me a wet mess reading that! Can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Mmm hot hot hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Orgasmic!!

I love your stories, Britt. Made me feel like I was right there with you. Awesome!!

redkissyredkissyabout 7 years ago
Fantastic story!

Very sexy! I loved that you were able to get your boyfriend so hot and turned on with your adventure. 5 stars!

WstCstWstCstabout 7 years ago
very Hot Britt,,

mmmmmmmmmmm juicy

sexynursechefsexynursechefabout 7 years ago
You naughty girl...hehehehee

Wish it was me...hahhahahhahahaa..well done Darlin....Grins.

111ShavedDad111111ShavedDad111about 7 years ago
fucking hot

damn Brit i came 2 times while reading your new story

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 7 years ago
Excellent 5 star performance

Britt, You really delivered. Hot and steamy, what a great story. Xoxoxoxo Annette

Dicknaughty247Dicknaughty247about 7 years ago
Immersive Experience

Beautiful! An immersive experience that leaves the reader curious and craving for more. Looking forward to read your next story.

abob1abob1about 7 years ago
Fantastic!

Very hot, Britt! I'm glad you decided to share this story with us. I hope, for Shane's sake, that there is another rendezvous.

EhdudeEhdudeabout 7 years ago
Very good and hot Brittni!

As always, you captivate the action and feelings of what you were experiencing very well!!! A short story is as good as a long one when you write it!! Excellent baby! :)

Stay wet and sexy!!!

Alphamon35Alphamon35about 7 years ago
5 stars

You did it again Britt. The wait was well worth it. 5 stars don't do it justice. I was hooked from beginning to end

BiSubbieAtlBiSubbieAtlabout 7 years ago
Another Great Turn On

I came reading your story... like I do with every one of your stories.

You are the sexiest and best writer. I look forward to your next chapter.

Your hardest fan.

harderxxxharderxxxabout 7 years ago
pop

You are a great writer and I poped after reading it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A Smile upon a smile!...for Britt!

Britt does it again (although not with A'esha).... This woman is a trip. And Mr. Shane is one interesting dude! It IS a hot situation to contemplate...but one has to wonder just HOW one would respond...especially to Britt's CUM-ONs! Anyway...plaudits!.G.

Jayded_LustJayded_Lustabout 7 years ago
hot as fuck!

Short and sweet but so god damn hot! Love your dirty mind!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 7 years ago
Loved it!

Britt, you really know how to bring it! Would love to have a shot at you! First some foot worship, then some oral and followed by mounting and a stiff entry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unbelievable

AAAAAGGGHHHHHH!

I wish you would pant for me...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This reminds me...

Of a fun night out I once had 😍

InspiriniousInspiriniousover 5 years ago
Totally Hot!

Your fabulous short story is like the best quickie ever. Very well done.

I'm with Shane, you and A'esha need a round two and we all want to read about it.

Skye_subSkye_subabout 5 years ago
Well written and hot AF

This story completely covers in a well written, succinct way how amazing it is to be bisexual. Truly the best of both worlds and you wrapped it all up so beautifully. So sexy. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So hot especially the part at the end when Britt says to Shane you could never make me cum like that.

NICHOLXNICHOLXover 1 year ago

Hot and sweet, loved it. FIVE

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