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such
a soft lovely feeling this leaves in the senses....thanks...blue
sweet!
I really liked the idea of capturing fingers with strawberry vine
Nice...
...work, lost. Few wasted words or phrases. Enjoyed this!
perfect
Beautiful. Precise. Every poem should be this way.
I'm confused
The one thing this poem could really benefit from is an introductory quote from another source at the top. There is a certain sweetness, but I don't know who the people are.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.
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