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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/27/04

oh my

wow...very exciting.had me squirming in mt chair as i read it

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by Anonymous06/28/04

Super!

This was wonderful. Made me hard-If I could only talk my wife..........

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by Xplorer in FL10/31/04

MMMMMMmmmmmm

Definately one of my fantasies. Lovely... absolutely lovely... maybe one day i will find a lover who will allow it.

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by caterwauller11/14/04

Better than I expected, even from YOU

You had me dripping from the beginning. So very hot, and so very well-written. Thank you for the delicious imagery. Makes me want to run out and buy a strap-on . . . and then figure out where you live . . .

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by Anonymous11/17/04

atta girl kitty

OH GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous11/29/04

This is very good, so hott

Very good, very descriptive, did justice to the whole role reversal thing and, the ass fucking wonderful

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by Anonymous07/29/05

Bravo

Excellent story, great to read a story about such a wonderful subject. Cheers

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by majikfingers12/03/08

Awesome Read!

This was a wonderful story! Very well written and it gave me some ideas for using a strap-on for the first time on my Master. :)Thank you for writing it!

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by Lia Monde11/19/10

Fulfilling

Nice tale of experimentation between a loving couple.

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by roverone11/28/16

VERY hot...!

Loved the reversal and the love between them...
AND the last line...wondering if he'd also taken her cherries, told from her POV...

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