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Michelle's New Profession Ch. 03

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by BobNbobbi01/25/17

Transition . . .

. . . to where and what. This chapter is short, just a tease really. It is clear a hot weekend is in place for Michelle in Seattle while Robert waits a hundred miles away at home. Is Michelle going to be the good hearted whore with Jeremy while teaching him the ropes of dating and bedding an older woman to give him confidence with college girls his age? Sound like that's the plan for Friday night, Saturday night may well be something quite different. An experienced businessman paying big bucks is probably going to want the hottest slut imaginable, something he doesn't necessarily get at home. Michelle may well find herself fucked from top of the Space Needle to the bottom and all levels in between.

Robert will just have to wait at home wondering unless he goes to the steak house looking for just a little extra sauce. Good job RobertL.

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by Mbgdallas01/25/17

Love the writing.

Hate the story. I just can't get my head around Michelle. She just doesn't act like a wife and these two don't act like a married couple.

This is supposed to enhance the marriage and the sex but there is absolutely no indication that that is happening in the story.

5* though because robertL really lays it out there.

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by wylie23601/26/17

i see the apologists from lush have shown up.

Some people take comfort in things that never change. Unfortunately, that sentiment leads to boredom when reading stories. I keep waiting to read something different from this author, but I guess the wait will continue - probably forever.

I guess I could pat the author on the back for his writing ability, but I'm not grading papers for an English or Creative Writing class tonight.

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by TediumsShadow01/26/17

opened story as fast as I could click

so anxiously waiting for the continuation of this ....
that I was literally rubbing my eyeballs on the screen...
but it is difficult to read like that

I am........
a fan of this genre
a fan of your writing style
a fan of this storyline

and I'm at this site everyday looking for your works!

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by MajorRewrite01/26/17

This continues to be a weird series

A romantic prostitute? A prostitute who refuses payment? This is a strange alternative universe.

Also, I'm not too surprised that Michelle turned to prostitution. She'll do anything to escape her boring life of Denny's and square dancing.

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