by mistress_demetra
The finish was great and the actual description was good, it showed either great writing skills or first hand experince with great uninhibited sex.
I want to thank everyone who left a comment on my story! I would really like to speak with the person who left the one comment. They didn't leave thier name, but I would like to tell them that the story is kinda both experience and writing skill. I have had my share of uninhibited sexual experiences. I like to try new things all the time! Please leave another comment if you are able. I would love to talk with you! Kisses!
Mistress Demetra
Writing leaves something to be desired. Doesn't flow. Editor should have caught that.